tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578792.post5846308698541692319..comments2024-03-28T05:08:54.838-07:00Comments on Jon's Jail Journal (by Shaun Attwood): Two Tonys PrologueJonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02894626355758041112noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578792.post-64840775565441810312017-02-19T03:09:59.506-08:002017-02-19T03:09:59.506-08:00Did you know you can create short urls with Shorte...Did you know you can create short urls with <b><a href="http://shortener.syntaxlinks.com/r/Shortest" rel="nofollow">Shortest</a></b> and <b>get $$$$$ from every click on</b> your short urls.Bloggerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07287821785570247118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578792.post-59822988988097650122015-06-19T10:17:49.187-07:002015-06-19T10:17:49.187-07:00great feedback Rosa, thanks! :) will be incorporat...great feedback Rosa, thanks! :) will be incorporated :)Shaun Attwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14332977761572848977noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6578792.post-25865808076166579852015-06-18T20:52:09.833-07:002015-06-18T20:52:09.833-07:00For some reason, I'd like to know the size of ...For some reason, I'd like to know the size of the room and the size of the men in the room. Were the detectives larger or smaller than Two Tonys? Were they crammed into the room? Was it hot or cold in there? Was anyone sweating? If so, how much?<br /><br />And the detective's "desperate expression" doesn't fit with the ice cold eyes you later describe.<br /><br />Also, I'm from the southwest (NM) and we don't twang. We sound more like mid-westerners. The twang is really a West Texas and on into the southern states kind of thing.<br /><br />Also, as a bit of idiomatic English, we never say "take the Fifth Amendment," we say "take the Fifth" or "plead the Fifth" and everyone knows what it means in this context (from watching crime dramas on TV, mostly).<br /><br />However, I would definitely keep going if I opened the book and read this prologue!!Rosanoreply@blogger.com